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雅思写作遇议论性题目 哪些技巧可增强表现力?
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  写作成绩的高低和雅思(课程)写作表现力的强弱有很大的关系,因为雅思写作题目大都是议论性质的,所以增强写作的表现力,能够在很大程度生提高雅思写作成绩。本文为想要提高雅思写作分数的考生一个思路,供考生们参考。
 

  雅思写作表现力技巧一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。

  这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。

  例如:

  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

  Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

  例如:1) Weak:The team members are good players.

  Revision:The team members play well.

  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

  例如:

  1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

  2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
 

  雅思写作表现力技巧二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。

  这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。

  例如:

  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

  Better:She compares prices and quality.
 

  雅思写作表现力技巧三、尽量运用主动语态。

  之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。

  例如:

  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

  Better:Charity has supported the organization.

  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
 

  雅思写作表现力技巧四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。

  想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。

  例如:

  1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
 

  雅思写作表现力技巧五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。

  这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上!

  例如:

  1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

  Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

  2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

  Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.